#123 Exchanging Opinions 2

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_______________ in danger of _______________.

The employees are in danger of losing their jobs.

Frogs are in danger fo becoming extinct.

We are in danger of losing our free speech.

 

It/That would be great _______________.

It would be great to see you again.

That would be freat if you could make it to the team gathering tonight.

It would be great if we could go to Manchester as well.

 

I like how _______________. : 난 ~한 게 마음에 들어. 꼭 방법/방식에 국한된 건 아님.

I like how it all worked out for the team.

I like how this turned out okay.

I like how he gets things done.

 

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Original: The project should be finished until next Friday. 

Better: The project should be finished by next Friday. 

 

Original: One of my project members say to me he has a plan to work this weekend. 

Better: One of my colleagues on the project told me that he intends to work this weekend. 

 

Original:  I guess he has got many patience to him. 

Better: I guess he has been very patient with him.

 

Original: Today I was really busy because of the insurance problem; the insurance of my parents. 

Better: Today I was extremely busy due to an insurance issue with my parents' insurance. 

 

Original: At the time she wear very expensive clothes, and she showed herself very well. 

Better: At the time, she was wearing very expensive clothes, and she presented herself very well. 

 

Original: At that time, she suggested me to buy her insurance just like my family. 

Better: She suggested I buy her insurance, just like my family did. 

 

Original: My mother buy the insurance, but the insurance turns out to be fraud. 

Better: My mother bought the insurance, but it turned out to be fraudulent.