Key Word
rough draft: a first version of something (such as a document) that needs a lot of editing and rewriting.
I just completed a rough draft of my speech.
be on the way to something: to be close to doing something
All teams must present a mind map on ways to improve sales. 모든 팀은 매출 향상을 위한 마인드맵을 제시해야 합니다.
Let me finish... : 내가 말 좀 끝내게 해줘.
Are you ganna let me finish.
Shut up and let me finish.
Could you please let me finish what I'm saying?
Feedback
Original: I think if I do the brainstrom, then I need the very very big paper to draw the ideas on the paper.
Better: I think if I brainstorm, then I need a very very big piece of paper to draw the ideas on the paper.
Original: Whenever a person present his own idea, then someone is writing in the paper connecting the ideas.
Better: Whenever a person is presenting his own idea, then someone is writing on the paper, connecting the ideas.
Original: Finally paper is put on the wall.
Better: Finally, we put the paper on the wall.
Original: I think the brainstorming is very funny and I like the meeting.
Better: I think brainstorming very funny, and I like these kinds of meetings.
Original: I can hear the others idea.
Better: I can hear the others' ideas.
Original: I think of the ways are good.
Better: I think both ways are good.
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