Key Word
keep up with : do whatever is necessary to stay level or equal with someone or something. 따라 잡다.
The annual sales took a big hit in 2010.
flattern out: stop rising or falling, and stay at the same level
If the housing market continues to flattern out or even decline, we are in for some tough times.
.. hit a peak of..
Sales hit a peak of around $12,000
The scok hit a peak of just over $17
This... tells us...
This pie chart tells us each party's contribution.
The line graph tells us an increase in spending.
This bar graph tells us totla visitors each year.
As you can see...
As you can see sales rose 30%.
As you can see stock prices declined.
Feedback
Original: I can see the print, and also I can see some chart on the paper.
Better: I can see a printed chart on some paper.
Original: Last year, I bought Tesla, so I lose much money.
Better: I bout Tesla stock last year, and I lost a lot of money.
Original: When the Tesla stock hit a peak of 8 more than $1,000, now it is $100, so I lose 90%.
Better: Tesla stock hit a peak of $1,008, and now it's $100, so I've lost 90% of my investment.
Original: This pie chart tell us annual sales.
Better: This pie chart tells us the annual sales.
Original: As you can see, the stock prices decline.
Better: As you can see, the stock prices have decliened
Original: Apple carries products so expensisve.
Better: Apple's products are so expensive.
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