Key Word
line of work
A: I’m in Software Development.
B: Good lines of work.
bottom line
New products will affect our company’s bottom line.
Feedback
Original: Recently I move my job to different company.
Better: I recently changed my jobs.
Original: In the company I need to speaking English.
Better: I need to speak English a lot at work.
Original: I think my English, I can’t speak English fluently well.
Better: I can’t speak English fluently.
Original: All of them smiles each other.
Better: All of them are smiling at each other.
Original: Two people are hand shaking.
Better: Two people are shaking hands.
Original: I’m Junior software engineer from Smith Corporation.
Better: I’m a Junior Software Engineer from Smith Corporation.
Original: If I meet a person with a very strict face, I think they think about me like “She looks boring. She looks negative. She’s very hard…”
Better: If I meet a person who has an unfriendly face, I think that they are thinking I’m boring, negative, and not friendly.
Original: We need to keep an eye on the situation before we make an agreement.
Better: We need to keep an eye on the situation before entering into an agreement.
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