#57 Opening and Brainstorming 1

Key Word

rough draft: a first version of something (such as a document) that needs a lot of editing and rewriting.

I just completed a rough draft of my speech.

 

be on the way to something: to be close to doing something 

All teams must present a mind map on ways to improve sales. 모든 팀은 매출 향상을 위한 마인드맵을 제시해야 합니다.

 

Let me finish... : 내가 말 좀 끝내게 해줘.

Are you ganna let me finish.

Shut up and let me finish.

Could you please let me finish what I'm saying?

Feedback

Original: I think if I do the brainstrom, then I need the very very big paper to draw the ideas on the paper.

Better: I think if I brainstorm, then I need a very very big piece of paper to draw the ideas on the paper.

 

Original: Whenever a person present his own idea, then someone is writing in the paper connecting the ideas.

Better: Whenever a person is presenting his own idea, then someone is writing on the paper, connecting the ideas.

 

Original: Finally paper is put on the wall.

Better: Finally, we put the paper on the wall.

 

Original: I think the brainstorming is very funny and I like the meeting.

Better: I think brainstorming very funny, and I like these kinds of meetings.

 

Original: I can hear the others idea.

Better: I can hear the others' ideas.

 

Original: I think of the ways are good.

Better:  I think both ways are good.